~~~isabella gm app~~~~~

hey thank's, for reading, my gm app, pls read all of it thank's !

first name:[lovely hehhe]Isabella.

IGN: Isabella lols.

Age:15 years old. (birthday is 16 of april)

Experience: (as in being a GM, if u know any coding languages, etc.) I've had plenty of experience ,in being gm. Ive been gm on over 7 diffrent private server :P . Yes i kno c++ and javascript pretty flunt. Ive scripted and coded SkylineMS and that has all scrips' in world, i can code custom PQ's, (my best one took 10hour's to code, lol's and i can change the stat's, of equips and stuff)

Why you want to be a GM at pulseMS:Becouse i think i can help this server to grow, i have plenty experience, in GM, admin and owner.I kno how mutch pressure owners are under. Having me as a gm, will take some of the weight off your shoulders.
I have experience in advertising, making vid's and banner's, recruting also. I CAN SPEEK ENGLISH SPANISH(KINDA) FRENCH(GOOD ENOUGH) AND GERMAN (VERY GOOD)

Will you leave if you are denied as a GM?Of course ill stay, and help the gms and maplers', if people leave becouse they not gm then it just shows that there greedy and would use there powers in the rong way :)

A little about yourself:my name is isabella, im a fun loving girl. I love music and sports and i love maple also i love helping people

How long have you been playing PulseMS?Not long but ill play it till its shut down (not trying to make people deprested lol's) and i also go on fourm's alot and help people with problem's. Ive owned over 5 server's so i kno about being staff and im not those lazy gms that stay in fm all day and do nothing but just be mean to people(even tho i love fm lol's ) a vote for me, is a vote for a better server!!!!!*ok dont go copright on me now*

click link to banner i made

https://s347.photobucket.com/albums/p457/maplejungle/?action=view¤t=4.jpg





EDITED: i edited becouse it had next to no grammer in it

!isabella!

Hehe, Nice app
Goodluck ^.^

TofuBeast wrote:

You sound pretty serious about being a Gm.
I hope you have time to ACTUALLY read the sticky note, instead of copying the answers and answering them.
Also, please re-read your application, and show some work into it.
For example, fixing your spelling errors.

Good luck.

i read both fm and gm sticky notes very clearly

Masrit wrote:

Hehe, Nice app
Goodluck ^.^

ty!!!

TofuBeast wrote:

isabella wrote:

i read both fm and gm sticky notes very clearly

I hope you read it MORE CAREFULLY, because there is some important information you should apply to your application.

That's all.

WOW THANKS TOFU I JUST TOUGHT OF STUFF LOLS

You? Knowing C++?

I call this bluff. If you knew half the shit it takes to understand and contain C++ knowledge, guessing your I.Q, your head would erupt.

Blanket wrote:

You? Knowing C++?

I call this bluff. If you knew half the shit it takes to understand and contain C++ knowledge, guessing your I.Q, your head would erupt.

a dude to run a maple ps u need to kno c++ and javascripting.....

TofuBeast wrote:

I don't think your actually taking my advise into regards.
And I don't know if your remark was sarcastic or not, but anyways.

Good luck.

o no i was it just i dident up date it yet well i have now but not when u said it and i sweaar i wasent being saracstic :)

Blanket wrote:

You? Knowing C++?

I call this bluff. If you knew half the shit it takes to understand and contain C++ knowledge, guessing your I.Q, your head would erupt.

and anyway c++ is easy me and freind made loads of vids on yt about diffrent c++ coding of maplestory like custom pq eidit stats on gm hat and easy shit like make regester page and make download and change exp drop messo rates and quest rates not like in game like doing !exprate 1000 or sumin like in the data bace

She knows what she's talking about here. Don't underestimate people, you may be in for a surprise. ;)

Though an improvement to your grammar would be very helpful.

I don't think I need to say more than



STOP! GRAMMAR TIME!

Quote :

Please speak English in your application and use proper grammar.

Blanket, one's grammar does not show what their IQ is; in fact, I've experimented with such. I once decided to go onto a WoW Private Server and make two accounts one person using perfect grammar and one talking like an absolute fool. People's opinion on my Grammar use character and my non-grammar use character were completely different.

Werts wrote:

She knows what she's talking about here. Don't underestimate people, you may be in for a surprise. ;)

Though an improvement to your grammar would be very helpful.

kk lol ill eidit it it will take me like 5 hours tho ?? lols!!

ForbiddenFruit wrote:

I don't think I need to say more than



STOP! GRAMMAR TIME!

Quote :

Please speak English in your application and use proper grammar.

i wrote full words not abvisations...

While I agree with Ch that one's IQ cannot be 'seen' just by judging on grammar, I would like to say to Ch that he might want to have a better look at what others say before speaking.

Quote :

You? Knowing C++?

I call this bluff. If you knew half the shit it takes to understand and contain C++ knowledge, guessing your I.Q, your head would erupt.

I don't see Blanket saying anything about Isabella's grammar. You can assume he did judge her by grammar, and that's what I do, but you cannot say he's actually calling her stupid for the grammatical failures Isabella made in her application.


Just a little bit of advice to those trying to apply for GM.. Grammar. Is. A. Must. Your grammar doesn't have to be perfect, but at least make it so that your application is readable and enjoyable to read. I've seen so many people applying to be a GM, with such horrible grammar, that the owner of the server definitely couldn't understand a word in that application. You can't promise someone a high function as GM if you cannot even understand him or her.
So, once again, no need for perfect grammar, as long as it's readable and not too long or too short.

About the application:
Isabella, please do not include your last name. I would not like it if someone was to stalk you and do bad things to you. O_O; Even though, I'd like to mention... My World History teacher last year, had the same last name. x] (Past tense, because she recently got married. Now it's 'Jagel'. O_O)
Also, you are still missing one important factor in your application. As stated before, please read the paragraph before the application form.
Question. Is that the best grammar you have? Or do you just not want to take the time to capitalize and punctuate correctly? I don't mind if you use some abbreviations, but I'm talking about grammar. Not spelling and abbreviating. If you can't make the grammar better, that's completely fine. At least you tried your best. [:

Discussion:
It would not surprise me that she knows C++, because I know C++ and it's not too complicated to learn. (Well.. I've been coding for a LONG time.)
But, I don't see why that matters here, because we don't use C++ on this server. We use Java. But it's good to know you know some type of coding. =]

Anyways,
Like I said. Please edit your application. I'm sure you're an intelligent girl.
It's hard learning so many languages, I'm pretty darn impressed.

I have no heck of an idea what 'abvisations' mean. Even Google couldn't find that word.

Anyway, from what I understand in your application:

Quote :

hey thanks, for reading, my gm app pls (Hmm.. Looks like 'Pills') read all of it thanks !

first name:Isabella Walsh

IGN: Isabella lols

Age:15 years old (birthday is 16 of april)

Experience: (as in being a GM, if u know any coding languages, etc.) I've had plenty of experience, in being gm and I've been gm on over 7 different private servers, :P and yes I know C++ and Javascript pretty flunt (flunt..? I think you meant 'fluently') :P and I've scripted and coded skylineMS and that has all scripts in the world, and I can code custom pqs, (my best one took 10 hours to code, lols and I can change the stats, of equips and stuff)

Why you want to be a GM at pulseMS:because I think I can really ,help this server to grow, I have plenty experience, in GM, admin and owner and I know how much pressure owners are under and having me as a gm, will take some of the weight off your shoulders.
I have experience in advratising (Sounds like some kind of a pig-like animal or something.. I think you meant 'advertising') and making videos and banners and recruiting also and I love this server!!! AND ALSO I CAN SPEEK ENGLISH, SPANISH(KINDA) FRENCH(GOOD ENOUGH) AND GERMAN (VERY GOOD)

Will you leave if you are denied as a GM?of course ill (Someone's ill?) stay, and help the gms and maplers, if people leave because they did not become gm then it just shows that there greedy and would use their powers [s]in[/s] the wrong way :)

A little about yourself:my name is Isabella I'm a fun loving girl I love music and sports and I love maple also I love helping people (You took the word 'little' a bit too serious, didn't you?)

How long have you been playing PulseMS?not long but ill (Crap, someone's ill again.) play it until it's shut down (not trying to make people deprested (depressed..?) lols) and I also go on forums alot and help people with problems and I've owned over 5 servers so I know about being staff and I'm not those lazy gms that stay in[s]n[/s] fm all day and do nothing and just be mean to people(even though I love fm lol ) a vote for me is a vote for a better server!!!!!*ok don't go copyright on me now*

click link to banner I made

Now THIS looks more like an application ^^.
Commas and periods are important too. They need to be used every now and then, and at the right spots.

Good luck correcting your application.

The things I said were harsh and uncalled for on my part. At the time I guess you could say I was upset at the fact that not only did she leave my guild because she was being approached on the "Eury v. Isabella" argument, but she decided to attempt to bash me in-game.

However I'm beyond this point anymore and I'm sorry. I really didn't think one comment would cause this stir. James/Frank, care to read more carefully next time? ._.

I'm truelly sorry, Isabella.

Hmm? Blanket, what should I read more carefully next time?

Werts wrote:

Hmm? Blanket, what should I read more carefully next time?

wrote:

Though an improvement to your grammar would be very helpful

By this, I assume you thought I was judging her based on grammar.

EDIT: Let's not make this a discussion thread..

Blanket wrote:

Werts wrote:

Hmm? Blanket, what should I read more carefully next time?

wrote:

Though an improvement to your grammar would be very helpful

By this, I assume you thought I was judging her based on grammar.

EDIT: Let's not make this a discussion thread..

lols i wouldent mind